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prom0406
04-30-2009, 06:07 PM
Hi Ya'll,

Creating my first Squidoo lens was a lot of fun! It was kind of confusing at first but I finally figured it out after working on it for over a week. I can see where this can be a very valuable tool for generating and directing targeted traffic to your money making website. In the future I hope to create a lot more lenes and really take advantage of this traffic generating tool. Anyway, take a look and tell me what you think. All comments or suggesting would be greatly appreciated and I will reply to all comments.

For those of you who would like to review my first Squidoo lens Click Here (http://www.squidoo.com/myonlineincomesystem-review).

beckernpeeksmom-
05-11-2009, 03:27 PM
I think it is a great first lens! I liked the refreshing way to presented the info. I would only suggest that maybe you need a couple more pic's in the middle somewhere to keep it from being all writting. People like pic's and it seems to help them read the whole lens and not get bored easy. But that is just me, keep up the great work!!