New Squidoo Lense

[tandre]

Hello,

I have a new lense I would like some comments on. I am working in the emotional health niche and am trying to promote Panic Away and an e-book dealing with excessive sweating. I wrote an ezine article with the link to this lense but I am wanting to see what people think of it and ideas on how I can get people to see it.

Are there forum for anxiety sufferers? Should I get this on there or would that be spamming them?

Any thoughts would be helpful

http://www.squidoo.com/treatexcessivesweating

[Forum Admin 2]

This is a long lens for a visitor to read. It has some great information but lacks experiences for the reader to be able to relate more to it. I think you have set it up really well but to make it more accessiable to skim through maybe add bullets under this title "When you should see your doctor".

If you type in "forum for anxiety sufferers" it will bring up some forums that you might want to join that relate to this topic.

Since you have been so thorough in your lens, you also might want to write your articles geared more to experiences, that way they can relate while also wanting more information.

Great job!!

[tandre]

Thank you. I did try and relate some items to connect me to the material with stores about my public speaking and dance lessons. Is it too long and wordy, maybe this should be two lenses?

[Forum Admin 2]

You might want to break up the content into new modules with more pictures. This way it tends to be more inviting for the reader and takes away the length of the lens:)

[TshirtFrank]

Hi tandre,

I think that you are on the right track. I agree with FA2's comments, they will surely help your lens out. Another thing that I noticed was the google adds that you have on the squidoo page. You may want to actually see if any of those products have an affiliate program, it may help you to monitize your lens a little better.

[Forum Admin 2]

Great insight TSF! Thank you for sharing your thoughts :)

[Moderator 1]

You have a really good lens there. It may be a good idea to break up a couple of your longer text modules and put another picture or two. You can make your images clickable to create more opportunities for your visitor to click through to another link or the product you are promoting.

You can also donate all of your Squidoo procedes to a charity or charities and you do not have to have any of those ads on there. Just another option of course. TSF also shares some very good ideas. :)